I feel it is not the drums problem. It can be good BGM for RPG games, but I feel the melody is not memorable enough.
Doesn't really have melody, yet. But thanks for the advice about drums & melody. "Electronic Patterns" is a concept about repetitive patterns. So melody.. or not?!
Got it! :0) But you have for example.. tons of Tangerine Dream or Klaus Schulze tracks without melodies. Or "hidden" melodies. Chords or shapes of textures doing it.
Their best works. When melody emerges from cacaphony and you realize the structural elements of the tune were buried in the "noise" the whole time. https://yewtu.be/watch?v=AqzgGfxFSNk